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THE PLACE DE CREME
Contributed by
SidneyCid
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:10:14 PM in AEST
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December 6, 2002
THE PLACE de CRME
Topless waitress Spicy Lee, As one might think, was great to see, For where she worked, the Place de Crme, Required their girls to be supreme.
And Spicy Lee was that and more, Even when her clothes she wore, And dressed in scanties, and in none, Her plentitude was that to stun.
Politely customers she served, And when she did, she was observed, And verily their necks careened, When she across the table leaned.
And happy patrons were they all, And tables filled and evry stall, And they alert and wide-eyed, too, Forever Spicy kept in view.
With Spicy bouncing here and there, All heads are turned to at her stare, And thoughts of food, and it to eat, Was more on Spicys double treat.
And less of eatings thought about, As Spicy bounces in and out, And busness booms; and it is seen How Spicy spices the cuisine.
But questions rise of Spicys need In place where folks their faces feed, But reasons yet are not complete, For watching bouncies while you eat.
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SidneyCid
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Re: THE PLACE DE CREME
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:04:42 AM AEST (User
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The was simply delightful, I can see in my mind's eye Spicy bouncing while she served the rice. No wonder customers came from near and far, to see her jumble the plates must have been nice.
I just loved this Dalton, your humor is great.
So is your imagination!!!
Please keep the funny coming, and don't make them late. We all need more chuckles at any rate!
Warm Poetic love
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Re: THE PLACE DE CREME
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:59:31 AM AEST (User
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Glad to read your writes once more...they always put a smile on my face
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Re: THE PLACE DE CREME
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:08:41 AM AEST (User
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Good to see some humour again on YPDC welcome from bernard. Great Poem. |
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Re: THE PLACE DE CREME
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:18:40 AM AEST (User
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wonderfully entertaining as im sure is the case for spicys customers lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: THE PLACE DE CREME
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:25:47 PM AEST (User
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Wonder how many whiplashes there were???? This is absolutely adorable and hilarious. Great work.
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