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Whoops no title
Contributed by
Addelyn
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Tears that wont come torture my soul
My heart breaks at the thought of you and her
Nothing would give me more happiness than to hear you say
How much you need me
To hear you tell me that I havent loved in vain
Give me reason to live
Give me a reason to breathe
Without you I have no motive for life
I need you everyday
I miss you every moment
But to you I am nothing
She is the one you desire
She is your happiness
Your breath, your life
I am in the shadow
Of her brilliant light
and I always will be
Copyright ©
Addelyn
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2005-05-29 23:24:49]
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Re: Whoops no title
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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this is a great write that i can relate to all too well
im 21 now and if i dont have me a good cry atleast twice a week i go insane
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Re: Whoops no title
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:31:39 PM AEST
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you don't write poems MY BUTT, lol. This is great, and i look forward to reading more, hint hint.
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