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confusion emotions make you feel
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:07:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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One day I will be able to see
All the Destruction and harm I'm doing to me.
Until then just leave my lonely existance alone,
For I cannot find a home.
Where do I belong?
I'm wandering my life away,
One day my searching will be gone.
Show me how you live your life,
Happiness has never been achieved without a knife.
How do I handle this?
Is it alright that it's the depression I miss?
Or am I just uneasy with the thought?
Because sadness is what I've always fought?
Have I ever been truly happy?
I can't remember...
Is it now that I've finally found the cure?
It it just my attitude, because of the summer? The Sun?
When the nights grow longer and the cold returns will these feelings be gone?
Why do I doubt?
why do I question these emotions I've found out?
Why can't I just be satisfied?
Happy for all the nights that I havn't cried?
But here I am slowly drifting away...
Too long in one state I have had to stay.
-Kate Ecklund-
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Re: confusion emotions make you feel
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:32:55 AM AEST
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i know things get hard and you start to feel like you are just always alone
even when you are in a croud you still feel alone
but the truth is even if you are alone for along time
you never are alone for ever
this is a great write
and you want to talk about cunfusion
i wrote this poem i dont know if i should post
its pretty personal and can get me into alot of trouble |
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Re: confusion emotions make you feel
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by sride686 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:43:39 AM AEST
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| This is a sad write like most of your work. I really feel the loss and questions in it. You do a great job at sharing your true emotions and it makes great poetry that really draws the reader in and makes them feel the pain you have. My thoughts are always with you Kate and I wish their was something I could do for you. If I could I’d give you a hug and comfort you for I know how pain feels and sometimes I wish their was someone to hug and hold and just to feel loved and safe event if only for a minuet. Your friend….Steve |
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