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An ocean of brown
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:27:45 AM in AEST
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1: An Ocean of Brown
Can you swim?
Are you afraid of drowning?
How deep are you willing to go
For loves sake
Would you try and swim against the current
And just float and be taken anywhere
With out ever knowing
Would you trust me if I where the only thing
For you to hold on to
How would you feel?
When you look into my eyes
And see nothing but miles
Of an ocean of brown
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Re: An ocean of brown
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:39:13 AM AEST
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Very creative.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: An ocean of brown
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 03:15:33 AM AEST
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| I like this. It's short, but well expressed....Nice job. Scorp. |
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Re: An ocean of brown
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:23:47 PM AEST
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"All of my dreams and my passions are in your hands"
Beautiful write |
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