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rip my heart out
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:52:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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tell me you love me
more than anything in this world
then go ahead and take it back
rip my heart out!
tell me that im the only one for you
forever and always
then go ahead and take it back
rip my heart out!
tell me you love me
that you want me to be your wife
then go ahead and take it back
rip my heart out!
tell me ill no longer
have to live in strife
then go ahead and take it back
rip my heart out!
what the hell are you waiting for
just get it over with
dont make me wait in suspence
just go ahead
rip my heart out!
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Re: rip my heart out
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 03:46:58 PM AEST
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Nice job! You put this together very well...I can hear this as a song too...
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Re: rip my heart out
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:41:56 PM AEST
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Dont ya just hate it when men do that?....Women do aswell tho...argh...
Anyways, good poem...lol....enjoyed it.
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