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Full of Wonder
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:39:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wonder how it would feel if you ran your hands up my thigh?
(this chemistry is so strong, even you can't deny...)
I wonder how it would sound if you called out my name?
(two separate worlds, now that's a crying shame...)
I wonder how it would taste---your love on my lips?
(she messed you up real good; your heart full of hardships...)
I wonder how it would be to see the pleasure in your eyes?
(your walls broken down, and ripped of disguise...)
I wonder how secure it would feel to be embraced by you?
(that girl wasn't deserving---there's no need to make do...)
I wonder how it would look; You and I hand in hand?
(judging by our chemistry, things would never be bland...)
I wonder how it would be if we were to have just one kiss?
(with me as your lover, things would never be remiss...)
I wonder what you're thinking as you read out this poem?
(please be sure to think of me if your hands begin to roam...)
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:55:54 PM AEST
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ha! did you give it to the person? great style here and very creative:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by Zeldianus on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 03:44:49 PM AEST
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| This is an amazingly, wonderfully sexual poem! oh yeah, my hands roamed lol |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 04:37:10 PM AEST
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Very funny, had to giggle at last line. LOL...
Very creative n great writing....
Loved it.!
hugsss,
Nats. |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 04:38:45 PM AEST
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wow, this poem was amazing.... and the sexual imagary was strong... and the message was clear...
awesome write |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 04:54:29 PM AEST
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I am loving this one. What do you want to bet he would agree? Heck, he would at least give it a try, lololol. Great work.
Rita |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:04:07 PM AEST
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Very sensual in nature, beautiful over tones
of your feminine prowess showing, u know?
makes me wonder 2 . . .
Benedetto John Papa
aka Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:05:55 AM AEST
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| lol scorp that was good very good. |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by mylastwords on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:32:38 AM AEST
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awsum poem, i luvd it!!!! lol!!! very different and i luvd the sexiness!!!!!
keep it up,
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:41:06 AM AEST
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| Lovely little chat you have here. Could be either offline (with the unconscious chatter) or online. Speaks loudly of lust and attention gathering. (hmmm... reminds me of something.) This is a prize winner, Scorp. Nicely done! J. |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:52:13 AM AEST
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holy crap this is awsome, so sexy and sensual im in awe of your passion. if u dont have anyone at the moment im free tonight ;) lol j/p way cool poem.
SM |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:40:57 AM AEST
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| Yowza!!!!!! |
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Re: Full of Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 07:58:43 AM AEST
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| Damn this was as great as the first time I read it!!!! |
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