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Epicenter
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:35:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This is a memorial to the sun
This is the option I choose
Rather to run
Rather to stay
Would only cause the delay
The outcome I crave
The result not favored
In the order
I remained centered
The outdated agreement
Was rendered, wavered
And the multilevel depository
A Hierocracy
The lever to push
Would be the red one
Which requires the holy key
Who else but of course,
The love that cherishes
Like the lions unstealthly roar
Which optimizes the common nonsensical withdraw
The opium dens in the forest and the clumsy nicotine claw
The nude parade through the village
The silver beads traded, for a dropped jaw
Or so insensitive as to leave the shades tucked in the desk draw
Yet to have this escape, way higher, above the governing law
To add to you bewilderment, let me poor a shot of this hearty confusion
Let me not rant and rave about the government
Let me not poke holes in the cheese of this courageous excitement
Let me add words, that incite and aggregates, and segregates no more
Let me cause the pollution that is said to do such harm
Show me the institution which can convince me with research to disarm
I assure you there are no insurgents, dont act so morbidly alarmed
The past of irregular outcomes, and unpardonable excites
Squared then multiplied, when dived by the eighth insight
The conclusion can only stand if we remain prompt and intact
We are all at the epicenter of this colossal impact
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2005-05-30 17:35:50]
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Re: Epicenter
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:48:52 AM AEST
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| Outside the words, what is interesting about this is the *form* the poem takes. Looking at it, it appears to be bomblike in structure, adding impact to the title "Epicenter" without even reading it first. Obviously a metaphor, but whether for personal experience or shared experience I can't tell for sure. More relflective than emotive, but a skillful write, nonetheless. J. |
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