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“Collage”
Contributed by
andSHEbled__xx
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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On my wall there hangs a collage Of the time we spent together Pictures and quotes Reminding me forever
Through a simple snap shot True happiness is shown And when I think about the good times I no longer feel alone
Looking at these pictures Love seems so real There was a beauty between us That nothing could conceal
Ive done everything I can To hide the way I feel But now theres a brokenness That not even time could heal
Copyright ©
andSHEbled__xx
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2005-05-30 19:30:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: “Collage”
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:01:51 PM AEST (User
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hrm, well i like ths all around really, good structure and rhyme, a good Poem, nicely done..
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Re: “Collage”
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:01:12 AM AEST (User
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The poem has a good flow and lucid style.
Nice work...keep writing.
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