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Darkness
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:35:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You shut off my light
Im left wandering in the night
You closed all doors and windows
Now Im stuck with no where to go
I cant see a thing
And Im suffering to bring
Air into my body
Thanks a lot, buddy
Youve made me suffered
Youve made me shutter
You threw me in here
With all of my tears
I cant breathe anymore
It has become war
Between me and life
We are caught in this strife
But I know I cant win this fight
Im stuck here without the light
Theres no getting out
Theres no doubt
I cant live much longer
I have not grown any stronger
Im stuck in the dark
On any other day I love the dark
But not when it
Destroys me bit-by-bit
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sprinter27
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2005-05-30 20:35:49]
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Re: Darkness
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by poet70 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:57:43 PM AEST
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| The darkness can be hell, and you just described it very well here, good writing sprinter. |
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Re: Darkness
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:58:48 PM AEST
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i like the dark too sprints... and if it destroys me so be it. the darkness is everywhere... and unfortunatly we cant escape it. we must embrace it, face our fears. stay strong, sprints,
jennie* |
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Re: Darkness
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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| Darkness is always here, it is inescapable. But I would love it if you and Jennie wouldn't turn so headlong into it! There is bad; there is also good. I have seen good... from both of you. I see the dark a lot but to not become dominated by it is to turn to the light. Both of you are beacons in this darkness. Maybe you don't see it but, nonetheless, it is true. |
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Re: Darkness
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by xdeadxdollyx on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:26:45 AM AEST
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| The dark is the best even though I get so scared of it sometimes. |
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