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My Blood On Your Hands
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:37:23 PM in AEST
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Wrap your fingers around my neck
Suffocate me underneath the covers
Choke me, listen to me struggle
Stab me in the stomach, friend
Not in the back
Sit back and watch me bleed
Peel my fingernails from my skin
Slowly, one by one
Watch me cringe from pain
Sew my eyes open
So that I see you laugh as I die
Let my pain be your enjoyment
Pull out each hair from my head
Scratch away at my dry skin
Gaze at the terror portrayed on my face
Slice open my chest
And gouge out my heart
Leave me without feeling
Slit my throat while I sleep
View my eyes opening in horror
My blood on your hands
Give me my death, friend
Kill me slowly and surely
You stand back and enjoy the show
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Re: My Blood On Your Hands
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:46:39 PM AEST
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absolutely not, jennie!!! i love you too much. what the hell? jennie, look- you got me so worried, i'm showing affection. and we both know something's wrong with that. plz don't talk like that, jennie. unless we can get someone to that to the both of us, so we can die alone together. plz, jennie, don't give up on me. i won't let that happen- you know i won't. talk to me, friend!!!!
Your BEST friend FOREVER,
~sprints
P.S. do NOT leave me, girl!!! |
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Re: My Blood On Your Hands
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by poet70 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:54:20 PM AEST
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Sprinter's comment sounded like there is something to be worried about. WELL YEAH!!!! I think I have to agree,girl you sound like you might need help, it is pretty icky sounding, and yet it would make an excellent horror clip in a MOVIE, but a poem, not to sure about, hope you get help.
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Re: My Blood On Your Hands
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:04:19 PM AEST
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Ick! This was one of the most disturbing poems I've ever read. I don't mean to be insulting, Jennie, because from a literary sense it conveys imagery, but I honestly don't like the message. Sprints is so right. I'm not sure what's going on, but it hurts to read this (as I am sure it hurts you to write it). You mean a lot to so many people who care for you. You can't deny that. You are... hell, what am I going to say that I haven't said before. I (and a whole lot of others) would miss you. So much. You've touched a lot of ppl's lives.
Be well my friend! |
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Re: My Blood On Your Hands
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by waos on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:13:38 PM AEST
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You definitely got the gory, and the shock value with that hun, that's
dark and scary... I hope you're doing alright; I can kind of relate and
have thought similar things in my mind before.
~Kara |
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Re: My Blood On Your Hands
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by wizard on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:51:02 PM AEST
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it seems that the one doing the killing isn't necessarily a person...ironically, it could be life itself, taking itself away from us every day...piece by piece. i don't find this as disturbing as some of the others who have commented...
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Re: My Blood On Your Hands
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:58:01 PM AEST
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disturbing indeed..
but with incredible imagery..
with friends like that, who needs enemies..
or murderers for that matter
deliciously haunting though-
B |
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