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Insatiable
Contributed by
wizard
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:39:42 PM in AEST
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No matter what you have, you still want more,
Never satisfiedsuch a whore
Consuming everything in your path,
Never a day that Im free from your wrath
Youaddictionwill never cease
Youaddictionan evil beast
Youaddictionnever cured
So many viceshow absurd
Although Im free no more constraints,
Still my mind your message taints
Terrific pain bestowed your grip so tight,
Your grip the cause for my plight
Though now at rest you still remain,
Beckoning control, although in vain
A stronger will has overcome...
Retribution for what youve done
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-05-30 21:39:42]
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Re: Insatiable
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:59:24 PM AEST
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WOW!
Reading this was like getting hit in the face with a brick..
you write with magnificent power in this one bro.
very very formidable poem..
awesome write!
Billy
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Re: Insatiable
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:07:59 PM AEST
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This is awesome, Wiz. I had a son with an insatiable addiction. Took years for him to get to where he could make it a day, then another day. One step at a time, as it will always be. It can't be cured, it is always there, but it can be defied. It is just finding that inner strength and the fact that you actually do matter more than that drug. Strength to you, my friend.
Rita |
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Re: Insatiable
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:13:07 AM AEST
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| woe i mean woa |
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Re: Insatiable
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by surge_joebot on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:38:52 AM AEST
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| great poem, thanks for sharing |
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Re: Insatiable
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by mylastwords on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:45:39 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. I can sort of relate to parts! I used to be so attached to someone, and because of that he had so much power, but now I have found a beautiful boyfriend and things have changed!!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Insatiable
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by brew on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:41:16 AM AEST
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Very strong..........!!!!!!!! Great write.
Brew~ |
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Re: Insatiable
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:36:32 AM AEST
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very deep
I can relate
you are right
a stronger will "Willpower" is the key
there's no part I can say I like the best
cause the whole write is prefect
it really hit home you get a 5 from me
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Re: Insatiable
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 07:46:19 PM AEST
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WOW. A lot of depth to this write...The anger and resentment is fully felt...You laid this out like a pro, and I'm willing to bet it felt damn good writing this...I know the feeling. Very well done.
Scorp. |
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Re: Insatiable
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 07:30:37 PM AEST
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Paul,
I have read this over, . . . gosh, I can't even remember how many times. I am humbled and impressed beyond
that which words could ever express. I have often mentioned how I admire your strength and optimism. This [piece]
expressly epitomizes that . Perhaps a quote, (oh god, not another one ! lol) will help to explain . . .
"“He who gains a victory over other men is strong; but he who gains a victory over himself is all powerful.”
~Lao Tzu
Although the write in itself is powerful, the message here is deafening. I feel it. And your power is insurmountable.
It would be painfully easy to give up when faced with any adversity. True strength is found, when one holds themselves
steadfast in spite of it.
This was exceptional, dear wiz. There is much to be proud of here.
moved beyond movement . . .
~Breezy |
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Re: Insatiable
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 02:28:03 AM AEST
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I'm feelin' ya' here, as I'm sure many do. But out of those many... only a very few could put it sooo well.
Great job!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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