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Insomniacs Dream
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:20:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Tonight again, I cannot sleep
It's been awhile since I was in slumber deep.
My nights drag on days after days.
Morning equals the rise of the sun and its warming rays.
I hear the birds get up first.
To the dew to quench their morning thirst.
Then the early coffee drinkers,
Driving still asleep
Forgetting their blinkers.
Slowly society awakes,
At least two hours after the Sun breaks.
Now my alarm goes off,
Its time for me to wake.
Can't sleep in
For this insomniacs got a date.
Kate Ecklund
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Re: Insomniacs Dream
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:22:33 PM AEST
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| Very good write, i found that lavender helps...when i wasnt sleeping...i had a lavenderbath, put on lavender cream, burned lavender candles and put lavender drops on my pillow and stuffed animal, Hope that helps, but if u write this great of poetry when you are not sleeping i cant wait to see your work with a clearer mind. |
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Re: Insomniacs Dream
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by carebear_06 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:22:51 AM AEST
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| nice write. i myself did not sleep last nite its 8:24am and i have not went to bed. so i can relate to this |
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