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Confusion
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:42:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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confusion lost without reason
finding the end of my safe haven
lost and broken without reasons
wondering around, getting lost to be found
light a candle to dim the light
closing my eyes to try and fight
meanings are useless in a dead mind
finding a place in never ending time
screaming to hear the silence
voices playing across my conconcius
karma a justice with no trend
breaking broken if all is red
roses drop like falling stars
comfort and sadness in an endless lark
in the nothing of this life
death free my confusion
my unending lies and strife
for i am my own enemy
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Sonic_phoenix
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2005-05-31 12:42:46]
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Re: Confusion
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by electrique_poet on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:13:07 PM AEST
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sometimes we are our own worst enemy, i know i can be my own often
this was a good write, i like the style and the phrases used
... in words electrique |
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Re: Confusion
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:12:01 PM AEST
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i can very much relate...some interestesting paradies here...
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