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A SOLDIER CAME HOME
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:13:05 PM in AEST
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I was sitting all alone today,
thinking of so much with lil to do
then my friend called to say
that our prayers were coming true
my heart sank deep into my chest
so many nights we prayed for the best
and every letter this soldier sent home
told her she was not alone
and he's coming home
we made so many plans
we laughed, we cried,
her soldier was coming home,
then tears filled our eyes for all the soldiers not coming home
and we knew it was all in Gods hands
she wipped a tear from her eye
held my hand and we did cry
for all the soldiers that would never come home
and for the ones who will...
~~~~~thank you god for sending him home~~~~~~~
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2005-05-31 13:13:05]
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Re: A SOLDIER CAME HOME
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:45:00 PM AEST
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| Very powerful! Great write! My heart is with your country. |
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Re: A SOLDIER CAME HOME
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:24:18 PM AEST
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Fortunately some soldiers do return, yet too many fall.
War is cruel and can only leave scars, both on those that have to fight and those who's loved ones will never return.
Steve |
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Re: A SOLDIER CAME HOME
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:57:12 PM AEST
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| brilliant piece of poetry I bet you friend enjoyed reading it,,coz I did |
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Re: A SOLDIER CAME HOME
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:21:39 PM AEST
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What a beautiful tribute to all those that have fallen. So sad that they can't all return.
This was written just right, and wonderful read.
Thank you so much Tasha for the comments you have made on my poems, it's appreciated!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: A SOLDIER CAME HOME
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by Shishke_Bob on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:38:47 PM AEST
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A very good dedication to all of thos who have fallen, I think that this should be read by all who have a soldier who is away fro home and let them know that that there are others out there that are think of them as well. God be prased for sending them home and prayers for thos who did not. God bless.
KaBob |
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Re: A SOLDIER CAME HOME
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:56:16 AM AEST
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| great write .. I wish all could come home |
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