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The Angel's Fall
Contributed by
Hikaru
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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You are the fallen one
The one weve waited for
Our fall is in your hands
And our love is in your fate
(Orchestra solo)
If you fall
We sink with you
If you fail
Well love no more
So spread your wings
And fly against him
Decide our fait
And cry out to your home; the heavens
A shower of feather against my flesh
The smooth silk against my skin
(Humming choirs)
As lightning splits the scene
Heaven and hells blood is spilt
The Father of Heaven spills his tears
The demon roared his fury
But you never recoiled
(Choirs)
You are the one to stop the descent
You are the one wholl save our hearts
You are the one to keep us sane
Si vos deficio nos ero torpeo
Into the sapphire world you fell
Down to the lightest depths of hell
And there his power was strengthened
Tamen vos nixor in
(Orchestra and low choirs)
Screaming, shrieking
Forever fighting on
Never faltering
Always fighting on
Blow after blow
Strike after strike
Curse after curse
And still you fight on
(Choirs, orchestra, guitars)
(Choir singing)
Blow after blow
Strike after strike
And yet you fight on
Curse after curse
Scream after scream
And you still fight on
For years and years
For centuries and centuries
Youve fought
Neither winning the struggle
But now we walk to the battlefield
And enter a world of corpses
With your feathers strewn throughout our world
You grace us with a final smile
You gave your life for our hearts
Our passion, our faith
By Craig, aged 13
Copyright ©
Hikaru
... [
2005-05-31 14:06:09]
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Re: The Angel's Fall
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:43:11 PM AEST
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| different, but i liked it:) |
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Re: The Angel's Fall
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:49:01 PM AEST
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This has a very epic feel to it. Quite well done! Your command of English is very good, and the imagery as well. Bravo! Keep up the good work.
Andrew |
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