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Struggles of Love
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:13:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Rip,
My heart in two
6 in one pushing me away.
Kick,
Me to the ground
My soul screams in agony.
Thump,
My heart beats in pain
As tears pour from my eyes.
Why?
Dont you love me.
You say its not meant to be
Games,
Are all you play with me
No truth, thats plain to see
Lies
Are all I hear from you
Why cant you just tell the truth
Confusion,
Circles through my mind
Why did you lead me on?
Questions,
That I plan to ask
Its time to find out why.
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-05-31 14:13:35]
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Re: Struggles of Love
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:39:35 PM AEST
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| i feel this! nice job:) |
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Re: Struggles of Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:37:01 PM AEST
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I like the way you emphasised the opening words of each verse.Very dramatic
Nice style
Steve |
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Re: Struggles of Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:40:17 PM AEST
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| Wow---well done. Excellent presentation...I don't know how you wrote before, but this is very good! Scorp. |
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