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She Felt...
Contributed by
BuggY
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She felt so depressed,
She felt so sad,
She felt so stressed,
Looking at the life she had.
She wondered what to do,
She felt so alone,
She knew everyone,
Had left her all alone.
She wondered what it would be like,
To have no-one in her life,
At the moment she feels,
Everyones having a go with the knife.
She saw no light,
At the end of her tunnel,
Everything was black,
Turning back, was very doubtful.
She was feeling depressed,
She had no purpose in life,
She felt everything was misery,
She thought she wouldnt survive.
She knew no-one knew,
What cards she was dealt,
She felt like dieing,
Yeah, thats how she felt.
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2005-05-31 16:42:10]
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Re: She Felt...
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by twisted_dreams on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:46:33 PM AEST
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| that is a really good poem..sometimes i feel like the "She" in your poem! great wrtite |
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Re: She Felt...
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:56:26 PM AEST
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| This is a pretty good write...The flow was a little off, but not too bad. Scorp. |
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Re: She Felt...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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I thought about a girl finding out she was pregnant and the man left her
Very nice...because you can take it how you want |
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