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illusions of life
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:11:21 PM in AEST
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You are just an illusion of life
You are just another reason to stay here
Your not the enemy I keep fighting
Your the one trying to save me
Your just the illusion of life
Your another reason not to kill myself
You became the reason that I cry
You are now the reason that I hurt
Your the reason im not here
Your just the illusion of life
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Re: illusions of life
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:24:30 PM AEST
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this is heavy stuff but very powerful
this poem pulled me in and i really enjoyed this small piece....i love the way you compare life to an illusion
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Re: illusions of life
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:38:56 PM AEST
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Short, but you get your point across. I liked the line; "You became the reason that I cry, you are now the reason that I hurt..."
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