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EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:11:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate them
All of them
They tear me apart
They stare me down
I gotta get outta here
Outta this house, outta this town
**** you all
You dont care
Youre killing me slowly
Take away all of my life
Afraid so under my pillow
I keep a knife
Leave me alone
You make things worse
Dont touch me, stay away
You give me this pain, YOU make me cry
Keep your **** to yourself
Dont you realize youre the reason why?
**** off
Get away from me
You make me sick
I cant stand to be near you
I get a feeling in my stomach
Try seeing from my point of view
But no
Change is bad
Different is unacceptable
Try being isolated from everything that matters
A heart so distraught
It slowly breaks then in the night it shatters
I hate them
Every single one
They create a hell for me
Stab me in the back
Leave the knife in my skin
Blood dripping thick and black
They enjoy watching me die
My miserable life is their career
A handprint on my arm from your grip
Living a life not my own is my only fear
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blue_angel
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2005-05-31 21:11:34]
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Re: EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:32:22 PM AEST
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Wow.. This poem is freaking GREAT I love it Wow... I can relate so well! I loved these lines
"Change is bad
Different is unacceptable"
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" My miserable life is their career "
Thats really good! Wow Great write! Stay Strong! and Good luck with everything.. I hope things turn out well..but ya never can tell what things turn out to be! well anyways..like i said before GREAT WRITE...keep writing! |
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Re: EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:47:13 PM AEST
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This is so emotionally charged..Good write..
Jenni |
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Re: EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 12:42:57 AM AEST
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| JENNIE! f yah. So rageful, so forcefull I love It! |
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Re: EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:10:48 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
I can relate in a way.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:56:55 AM AEST
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good write, they should ***** off...they r totally opressive and wrong....so i like this write, ur anger expressed (not at me 4 once lol) keep up the writin
kc |
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Re: EDITED EMOTION (I HATE YOU)
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by Fahlia on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 10:17:10 PM AEST
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| Isolation is sometimes the only way to save yourself the pain. Betrayal is a ***** and humanity as a whole cannot be trusted with such a precious gift as friendship. That knife you speak of, that's the knife stuck in everyones back. The only question is, who will be the one to plung it in deep enough to deliver the final blow? And when? Not if...when? F*** off all of you. That's exactly the right thing to say. Why do the people who hurt us always ask if we're ok? They know. I loved it!... I appreciate it... |
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