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Good Advice
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:42:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This time it feels real alright
Light and soft again
Like a pillow to the skin
The feather floats to the ground
The tree shade that comforts
The rains that sing
This time I asked you
To dance with me slowly
Walk with me gently
Run away to nowhere
First time I saw you
Was the last time
I dreamt
Eyes opened
Our glance
Our moment
Unspoken and
Kept
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Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2005-05-31 22:42:28]
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Re: Good Advice
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:47:33 PM AEST
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This is nice . I love it
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Re: Good Advice
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by SuSanne on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:28:05 PM AEST
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Your words presented some beautiful images. Great write.
Sue |
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Re: Good Advice
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by Kevin on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:29:37 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, expressed ur feelings magnificantly...really great job :-)
-Kevin |
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Re: Good Advice
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:31:42 PM AEST
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*swoons* Oh Jyss!! You discovered a new talent here...I love it! Wow, look out romantics everywhere...!! lol
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Re: Good Advice
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:46:19 AM AEST
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A soft poem filled with tender words. I loved it.
Thanks for posting and sharing.
Jane xx |
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