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Smile
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 12:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Forgetting silence was still alive,
Bleeding its disgusting trail of humid sorrow,
Leaving behind a sea of broken hearts,
Or maybe its only mine in there
I cant remember
But the sun coughs its last ray of light,
And all is extinguished
Darkness sleeps in my soul,
And then I remember your moonlit smile,
Elegant and reviving, an ethereal lapse in time,
But your face was wrapped in white tears,
And all that was left,
Was your ****ing smile, mocking me till this day
The pillow awaits for its nightly dosage of sorrow,
Drunk on past memories and depression,
The soul rains colors of you,
Weeping, proclaiming that pain is only an illusion
Today, I woke up with a massive hangover,
Residues of nostalgia leaving an after taste in my mouth,
Anguish dressed up as me,
Walking aimlessly and raping peoples lives
And where does happiness dwell?
If you say in the small things,
Then why cant I find them?
Am I blind enough to see through wind,
And laugh at nothingness?
When does the beginning of the end of the beginning begin?
Show me how to forget,
Tell me, lost love,
How much you hate me
Mock me with recollections of what we used to have,
Smile for me, fleeting memory
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-06-01 12:33:11]
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Re: Smile
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by travisk on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:03:49 PM AEST
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excellent train-of-thought piece, loved it bud
just let it keep coming out, just like that |
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Re: Smile
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:35:13 PM AEST
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Terrific Steph you keep on writing I will keep reading your amazing writes
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Smile
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:43:41 PM AEST
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Wow Steph i can definitely say I will miss you
while you are gone. From the second line,
"Bleeding it’s disgusting trail of humid
sorrow," I was drawn right in. I just loved the
images that this masterpiece conjured this
was definitely not for the faint of heart. I hope
things begin to settle down for you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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