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Broken
Contributed by
confused
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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She stares into the mirror
As she sees her biggest fear
Her eyes are red
She wants to be dead
As the blood streams down her face
Her heart begins to race
Her soul begins to fade
She wishes she could have stayed
At home where she was safe
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Re: Broken
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:23:36 PM AEST
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Hey hun, this is good! You managed to express yourself so poignantly in so very few words. Keep it up, you're on track....
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Re: Broken
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by givingin on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:32:33 PM AEST
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Good write.
I know how this girl feels.
I don't ecsept what I see in the miror, I hate what I see.
GREAT WRITE
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Broken
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:47:12 PM AEST
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| Not to shabby. You have a way of letting us know everything in few words, like Scorp said. Good job! |
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