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Army of One
Contributed by
spazz911
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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blood-thirsty mosters blocking out the sun stricking so swiftly the screaming hasn't begun
bringing down others around you like hay chopping there lifes out makes your world start to sway
left standing alone encaged by your fear cut down by everything you once held so dear
gleaming metal shines and blinks in the dust you dive and you grab it covers your hand with rust
you dive and you swing and you push it all in killing persuers attacking fair game
killing persuers attacking fair game but as you knock one down two more swing into place
a shot flashes out its an airel view with you in the middle fighting off a black glue
it will cling to your body suck away all your life stick to your spirit overcome you with strife
the battle on lingers as you start to feel pain the shortness of breath as you realized no distance you gained
all other are gone so abandoned alone left to stick it all off sticking to your own code
fighting off demons burden waying a ton you stand alone you are an army of one
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Re: Army of One
(User Rating: 1 ) by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:32:51 PM AEST (User
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interesting write here kc... dont kno exactly what youre getting at with this... i see sumthing but it isnt quite clear... but sprints, i hope u appreciate this! well written spazz.
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Re: Army of One
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:22:06 PM AEST (User
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i love it, kc, i really do! and now that i read it a second time- i like it even more!!! lol. an army of one- me, myself and i. thanks for using me as inspiration to write this. i do love it!!
keep up the good work, kc!!
~sprints |
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