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Solace
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:54:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The look on your face
loving, tight embrace
delicate lip lock
hands clasped, we walk
Destination unknown
somewhere alone...
conversation unrushed
past pains hushed
Slow dance in the dark
under the stars in a park...
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
... [
2005-06-02 00:54:24]
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Re: Solace
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:15:15 AM AEST
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(((Scorp)))))
This poem is warm and lovely , I love it
Leia |
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Re: Solace
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:24:40 AM AEST
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Scorp i like this poem, but somehow i think there are some lines that are missing. It could be just me but theres something missing.
J xx
(Who hates looking like a "B") |
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Re: Solace
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by shadowmaster_045 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:49:55 AM AEST
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| Short, sweet, and too the point. I like it. |
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Re: Solace
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:20:11 AM AEST
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| Very nice, adventurous and mysterious. " destination unknown...." it's rythmn and flow were right on the button as well. Well done! |
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Re: Solace
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:02:21 AM AEST
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nice write...
so peaceful |
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Re: Solace
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:49:51 AM AEST
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you paint a very pretty picture lady and write a beautiful peice of poetry as always teasing the imagination as well as the heart . . .
Ben
aka. Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Solace
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:43:05 PM AEST
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| Wow, what a very emotional poem, you used very good words to express what you were actually feeling, it is also a beautifull poem, I felt this one deeply catch my heart. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Solace
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by Arden on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:17:29 AM AEST
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short, simple and sweet.
kinda short and maybe a bit to blunt. but nice work nontheless.
-Rebekah |
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Re: Solace
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:23:32 PM AEST
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simple and pretty
where has suditly gone?
a breath of fresh air my friend.
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Re: Solace
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:25:19 PM AEST
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| Short & Sweet. I like it. Very nice! |
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