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Sober Rain?
Contributed by
shadowmaster_045
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:46:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wont say goodbye until were over.
And if we are I wont stay sober.
Cover my tears with stolen beer.
Muffle my screams from my fear.
Mistakes were made I dont know how.
In my tears is where I drown.
All this pain it fades away.
Every time I see your face.
As I say goodbye because were over.
Nothings wrong Im just not sober
Rambling on I know its over.
Take my life a drink at a time.
Take my beer Its just not right.
Rate my pain I dont know how.
Im so sad I smile not frown.
Cry these tears, like November rain.
In the end its all the same.
Im wont say goodbye this isnt over.
Im so glad, cant believe Im sober.
Hold my breath until I scream.
I love you so much its not a dream.
And you love me I dont know how.
Im so glad these things worked out.
In the end its not all the same.
Im no longer crying its really rain.
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Re: Sober Rain?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:10:26 AM AEST
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| i liked this poem, the rhyme scheme was simple. but you had a couple of really good lines. |
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Re: Sober Rain?
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by 15andcounting on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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| This poem is great. Original, and unique, it made for a great break from all of the sad, emo poems I've been reading. lol.....It's awesome. Keep Writing! |
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Re: Sober Rain?
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by luckedout on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 03:53:11 PM AEST
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| awesome poem, I really like the turn around at the end |
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