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I Remember
Contributed by
mylastwords
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:01:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Never has life been the same,
Since that one day that you left us.
I see your smile, I feel your warmth,
I break down and cry.
My year 7 greaduation, my first serious boyfriend, my sweet 16th, my formals-
You were not physically there,
But I know that you were looking down on us.
You are my guardian angel,
Always taking care of me and making things right.
You give me strength to get through the tough times,
Your love keeps me going.
The memories of you will never fade,
The times we shared,
The fun we had,
The love you gave.
Never will I forget you-
You're too special.
I will visit your place soon,
And I will see you one day.
Love you always and forever nanna
xxooxx
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2005-06-02 02:01:18]
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:03:28 PM AEST
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| I can't believe that no one has posted a comment on this powerful and truly moving poem. I love the rhythm of this poem. Even though the words don't rhyme, it still flows perfectly. I've been there, my great-grandmother just passed away this year, it's hard to lose a loved one. You captured the feeling perfectly, I almost cried reading this. |
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