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The Afternoon of the Night
Contributed by
Ranchan
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Deep blue ocean,
Leap on to the potion.
Rape the craving for an action,
Stop the love inside the ever passion.
Breath the innocence of your own,
Away & away your left alone.
But as it returns in a late day,
The dreams sing a song for the happy lady.
The moon is dark in the heavy rain,
Consulting my love in a heavy way.
Arouse the song with a pint of rum,
Inhale the simple dose of mindless love.
Away & away your left alone,
Breathing nothing but your own.
Recite this letter,
To feel way better.
Copyright ©
Ranchan
... [
2005-06-02 15:11:02]
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Re: The Afternoon of the Night
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by heartbroken4ever on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:32:02 PM AEST
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| I like this It makes me think and I feel good |
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Re: The Afternoon of the Night
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:52:21 PM AEST
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each line contunues smoothly taking me into the next verse and yes it keeps you intent on reading and thinking about each word another great write from you
Michelle |
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