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you made me believe in you
Contributed by
rosethorn100
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:11:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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The night you met me,
You knew you wanted me
Knew you had to have me
Not just in your dreams,
But in reality too,
Finally I came to you
And shared some moment with you,
Your politeness and kindness,
You grab my attention.
At the beginning I was scared
But slowly I open the doors
Coz the words you said rang so true
I love you, my precious baby you called me
I want to grow old and grey with you
You're my heart, my soul. My Mind
And body to you and only to you mi amore,
You made me believe in you.
You shower me with much affection
Eventually you captured my heart
All my worries and troubles
Was toss out of the window?
For nothing else matters,
Just to see you on my screen
Lighten up my day,
Coz my heart that once had a hole
Was once again completed
You made me feel whole
I thought I found the one for me.
Until one day, you threw a bomb
That blew up my heart in to tiny pieces
Crashing on the floor, like shattered glasses
Am not ready to commit you said
I thought I was, but I was wrong
With shock I sat there stunned
With tears sliding down my face
Thinking is this really happening to me
I felt I could hardly breathe,
for my soul was torn apart,
After all I believed it was meant to be.
Words can't describe how you let me down
Remembering all the promises and the words you shared
You told me I don't want talk about it,
I don't want a remainder of it
As if I never existed in your life
You buried me like a coffin in the graveyard
Lashing your rage and anger out
Left me thinking what this person had become
so cold, so heartless, leaving me heartbroken
but now I know I must overcome
of what you made me believe in you.
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rosethorn100
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2005-06-02 15:11:09]
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Re: you made me believe in you
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:14:28 PM AEST
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| excellent poem,sad but sincere. Well done, i can relate. |
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Re: you made me believe in you
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:15:27 PM AEST
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Its good ya letting ya feelings out this way Rosey, poems are always good for that.
Keep on writing girlie.... Good job!
Huggsss n xxxxxx's ,
Nats. |
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Re: you made me believe in you
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:24:24 PM AEST
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It is too easy for people in chatrooms to wear a mask, to hide their real self.
To have someone lift your heart like this, only to rip it into pieces must have been a big shock.
I hope you can learn to trust again
Steve |
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