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The Vampire
Contributed by
ruby_star_angel
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 06:05:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I live within the darkness
I wish I could walk in the light
But I cannot do as I wish
The sun is as deadly as my bite
Alas, I settle with the silent shadows
Stalking me, constantly around me
Before this life, I was terrified
In this life, they are my friends and family
I am damned thanks to the curse
Immortality; the neverending breath
After so long, it is just another obstacle
A part of my life, and my death
I stalk you, kiss you, kill you
I take away your pathetic life
I am your worst nightmare
A Vampire; the seed of Chaotic Strife
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ruby_star_angel
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2005-06-02 18:05:35]
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Re: The Vampire
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:01:40 PM AEST
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This is a good write. You definitely got into the head of a vampire and did a great job of writing from that point of view. The very last line is my favourite. Great job, keep it up.
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