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Emptiness
Contributed by
lilch4ever
on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Looking into eyes but nothing appears.
A soul so vivid where nothing seem to lie.
A heart once vivid but became sad and void.
Stripped of love.
Stripped of feeling in every way.
Stripped of emotion.
Emotionless lies where there is no feeling, no sense of touch.
No sense of a loving feeling which once lied.
With every touch nothings felt but ones self likes it to be that way.
Once feeling something but now feeling nothing.
Once seeing now seeing nothing.
Emptiness lies where there is nothing.
Mind, soul, and body once filled with life but drained by the forces of something well-being.
Lost in the darkness of empty sorrows.
Everthing once vivid became lost in the darkness.
Darkness in which hidden pain once lied.
Feeling live once.
Feeling lost and wounded.
Being told ones self was nothing now filled with empty sorrows.
Sorrows in which there was.
Feeling so much pain.
Now empty feelings dwell.
Dwelling within ones self because of the pain one endures.
Shutting out all feelings inside, in the heart and mind.
Emptiness lies where there is nothing.
A soul so broken only feeling left is ones empty feelings and empty sorrows.
Empty feelings lie without.
Written By Charlene aka (lilch4ever)
on
11/29/02.
Copyright ©
lilch4ever
... [
2003-01-03 05:20:00]
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Re: Emptiness
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:53:09 PM AEST
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| i have been there but it is possible to come back from the emptiness |
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Re: Emptiness
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by EmSal on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:19:47 PM AEST
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| I guess that's how people get when they are fed up or tired of something or if they hurt too much. Hope everyhting is gonna be okay for ya. |
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