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you can keep it
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:06:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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take our hearts, you can keep them
Take our memories, I don't need them
because I know tomorrow will be the same
our painful love will always never change
take your lies, your twisted truths
take evrything you gave to me, it was all for you
remembering the future pained me inside
feeling your heartbeat it will never subside
knowing what you said, you didn't mean
this is a whole other side that i've never seen
you can take our feelings, leave it up to me
I tried to fix it all, I just wanted us to be
think about everything you never said
keep everything you lost inside my bed
take the happiness and twist it until it's gone
watch me fall apart as your heart beats on
my love was here but you forgot to look
fairytales are for children and i've never read the book
Take it all, all away from me
you can keep them, keep them from me
everything we lost and everything we found
you can keep it, so take it all now
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2005-06-02 22:06:54]
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Re: you can keep it
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by Shishke_Bob on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:18:24 PM AEST
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truly a sad and heart felt poem, it showes alot of hurting and pain inside I do hope that you are over this and better for it. (I will pray for you.) this was a moving poem and it made my heart sink when I read it, the flow and your choice of words and structuer were very good. I do hope to read more form you. Later, God bless
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Re: you can keep it
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by breakaway2feel on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:22:23 PM AEST
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| Wow! That really hit home....your poem really caught my soul, great job! |
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