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i'll see you in our dreams

Contributed by all_the_dead_roses on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:14:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

where would you like to go tonight
in our dreams I mean
would you like to old hands
and walk by a stream,
or lay on the beach
and watch the sunset in your eyes
or dance in the rain
facing the skies,
or maybe a picnic
in a park somewhere
shaping clouds
with no worries or cares,
so where will we go my love
we can go anywhere near or far
when we were together i was breathless
and now you are

Copyright © all_the_dead_roses ... [ 2005-06-02 22:14:03]
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Re: i'll see you in our dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:21:39 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing this... It is lovely..
Jenni

Re: i'll see you in our dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:58:50 PM AEST
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Bitter sweet..

"shaping clouds"...

I really loved that line..
and the rest as well..

B

Re: i'll see you in our dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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This is a truly splendid write. They may leave this earlhly plain, but they never leave our hearts or memories.

Rita

Re: i'll see you in our dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by 15andcounting on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:55:38 PM AEST
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I really like this poem...the topic is pretty unique and the subtle way you presented it is nice. The last line is really dynamic.

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