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Admonishment of a Wounded Heart
Contributed by
KayeRains
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:26:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dear Foolish Heart,
I warned you. You cannot say I didn't try. Nothing too good can be true. It's deception that you buy. Foolish heart, you've wronged me and have caused me too much grief. You've stolen all my happiness and I curse you for a thief. I know you loved him truly, though it reeked of desperation. You thought that he would be the one to assauge your desolation... but Cloud Nine evaporated and much too soon you were descending. You should've known much better than to expect a happy ending. No one ever seemed to realize how badly you'd been broken, for they didn't say, 'I told you so' (the truest words but never spoken). Next time I pray you heed my warning. Maybe someday you will learn... Heart, you cannot play with fire without suffering a burn.
Your,
Brain
Copyright ©
KayeRains
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2005-06-03 04:26:16]
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Re: Admonishment of a Wounded Heart
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:17:57 AM AEST
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| Very heartfelt and quite the interesting delivery too! Very original to write from the brain to the heart... Love hurts and the heart will most likely always fall for it. Thanks for sharing this one! dw |
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Re: Admonishment of a Wounded Heart
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by Sinned on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:20:18 AM AEST
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KayeRains
Feelings strongly came through and I liked the twisted end. "Your brain"
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Re: Admonishment of a Wounded Heart
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by speed-of-sound on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:34:32 AM AEST
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very unique! i really like it, sometimes it really does feel like my brain is saying 'i told you so'. it would be interesting to see what the heart had to say back to the brain about this...
thanks for commenting on my poem too,
hannah :) |
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