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Untitled
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"A dozen moments, laughs and smiles
A dozen years, a dozen miles
Along one endless trail
A set of footsteps, pressing forward
A set of faces, slipping towards
Our chapters final tale.."
The glances back, more now than then
Push all those days so far away
Some things Id wish Id live again
Some seconds, Id replay
With every face, with every name
There lies a golden ray
A light from whispers, jokes or games
To brighten up our way
And its because its not the end
I find the unseen tethers
That make us family, siblings, friends,
Might wash away with weather
But ere we leave from coast for coast
Because were still together
I propose one final toast
To ties that shall not sever
So, though we cant just stay the same
And never once was never
In memrys chalice, dreams champagne,
This ones to forever.
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
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2005-06-03 09:18:58]
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Re: Untitled
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:53:04 PM AEST
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Very good intro and very nice exit! I really enjoyed the way you told this...Well done.
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:56:33 PM AEST
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Excellent. Even though families are stewn hither and yon in our hearts we are all still connected. I find that to be the strongest connection ever made. Powerful.
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:58:52 PM AEST
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| This is very good. I have not read your poetry in a while and I must admit I am very refreshed. |
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