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Dreamland's an Escape
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 02:48:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Deep in dreamland
Lies reality
A place some love, and,
Others prefer not to be
Closing of the eyes
Is a temporary escape
Escape of lifes tragedies
Suicide, murder, and rape
When youre caught awake
Unable to sleep
Pop some sleeping pills
An escape more deep
The dreamers are guilty
Of being out of touch
They have their heads in the clouds,
Fantasizing way too much
Is it possible the dreamers are tired,
Of the world and its current state
They escape to a far off land
Where they are able to pick their fate
For the ones that reality
Is better than a dream
They are by far lucky
Or so thats how it seems
The two decisions
Are placed in front of you
Where would you like to go?
What would you like to do?
Dream or reality
Pick whichever is best
Choose what makes you happy
Living or deep rest
Deep in dreamland
Lies reality,
A place some love, and,
Others prefer not to be
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Re: Dreamland's an Escape
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:57:50 PM AEST
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Hmmm, I really like this, but for one thing...
The line about the sleeping pills just doesn't sit right with me..I dunno...like it lessens the poem somehow.
This is a gorgeous poem though, with or without those few lines.
So, great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Dreamland's an Escape
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 05:25:33 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Dreamland's an Escape
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 08:08:18 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem, dreaming is sometimes far greater than real life, but we must all come to face reality sometime... |
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