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Another Day
Contributed by
Northernrick
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We go threw alot, its ok
It will change another day
Life is a race
killing yourself is a waste
stay alive
live long
be strong
Im not deppressed
Ive learned to live
No point in ending it
even if i go threw alot of ****.
I will never go that far
I will be strong
I will live long
Copyright ©
Northernrick
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2005-06-03 15:29:37]
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Re: Another Day
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:43:31 PM AEST
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I like the message behind this.
You're right, it isn't the way. It doesn't help.
It is a waste, and it's not an escape, it's an ending.
Great write, too true.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Another Day
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:03:52 AM AEST
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I like this. I got the impression that you were not just speaking to the reader, but to yourself as well...It's good that you're staying strong and overcoming your personal hurtles. I will suggest you double check for typos next time, and "threw" should be "through." Keep up the positive writes!
Scorp. |
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Re: Another Day
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:31:58 AM AEST
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Great write! Stay strong thats what you gotta do, I'm glad you know. Keep writing too, I love it!
xoxo
--amanda-- |
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