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Its Ok
Contributed by
Northernrick
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:37:24 PM in AEST
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oops
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We may fight
Every Night,
But I Love you
And you love me
We got each other,
Thats what we need to see
Dont Look at the bad
Look at the good
We fight...
but we learn stuff new,
That we can get through.....
Relationships have there down
they have there ups
We can get threw this tough stuff,
Cause Are love means enough...
Dont give up
We can be strong
Let this relationship last long...
Copyright ©
Northernrick
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2005-06-03 15:37:24]
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Re: Its Ok
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:25:43 PM AEST
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Hmmm, there were a couple of mistakes (Are-Our) and you had some capitals in strange places, but overall this was good.
I like the general content.
Very good, very positive write. It's nice to see.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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