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Light Shines Through – As a Rainbow After The Rain
Contributed by
TheKid
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Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Light Shines Through As a Rainbow After The Rain
So Proud, Peaceful, Perfect Pure Phenomena
The Warmth Takes Away the Pain
A Miracle In the Sky
As Time Passes - The Light Grows Weaker
Slowly Drifting Becoming an Acquaintance with the Night
This Transition A Routinely Feat
A Predator in the Shadows
I Watch From Afar
Dream Infested Meadows
Sleep Eternally With the Angels
Copyright ©
TheKid
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2005-06-03 19:47:56]
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Re: Light Shines Through – As a Rainbow After The Rain
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 12:30:39 PM AEST
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Love the dark metaphors in here...You could really expand on this. Nice job!
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Re: Light Shines Through – As a Rainbow After The Rain
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by maestar on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:42:00 AM AEST
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Very good.
loved it
great and talented poet |
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