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Between you and me
Contributed by
speed-of-sound
on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:07:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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As we drive
Along these concrete hills
I wonder about life
About me
About you
Im no fool
I know what lies
Beneath these hills
Deep in your hazel-brown eyes
Yet we drive
We never think to stop
To turn back
And just see what weve got
Oh the indecision!
There must be a mistake
This mustnt be true
Not me
Not you
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speed-of-sound
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2005-06-03 22:07:10]
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Re: Between you and me
(User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:37:24 AM AEST
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| Good poem. I've had a dreams similar to this all the time. Very nice, I like it a lot. (^_^)b |
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Re: Between you and me
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by speed-of-sound on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 04:49:19 AM AEST
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| heeee thanks :) |
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