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Love Of The Lost
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:57:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Close your eyes, just listen now
Listen, you will hear
A soft voice, a voice you know
Whispering in your ear
Watch the rolling ocean
Rush towards the shore
Bringing words from her, the one
Who you miss more and more
Cast your eyes towards the sky
And there amongst the blue
Songbirds singing, please don't cry
She's waiting there for you
So carry on and don't be sad
She wants sweet joy to bring
Remembering the life you had
And halt your suffering
Remember now the times before
With warmth within your heart
Remember that her love is sure
And you will never part
She's waiting for you patiently
And wants you just to live
Praying that at last you see
You still have lots to give
Her love remains so strong and true
And never will she leave
She's there in everything you do
If only you believe
Copyright Ros Richards
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-04 05:57:56]
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Re: Love Of The Lost
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 07:14:41 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, thanks for sharing, well done |
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Re: Love Of The Lost
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:53:01 AM AEST
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Nicely written good flow easy to read.
I enjoyed your poem.
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Re: Love Of The Lost
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:17:26 AM AEST
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| i really like the style of this poem. it flows, speaks to the heart, and definetly is true. dont usually like love poems as i am a dark person, but thought this one to be really well done. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Love Of The Lost
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by nosferatu on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 04:34:13 PM AEST
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| I like your poem it was very peaceful to me. |
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