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The Marred Circle of Life
Contributed by
PuppyChow
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:56:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Innocence is so fleeting
If you blink it can be gone
We all grow up too fast
Then society drops the bomb
One minute were all so polite
Working our way up to greatness
The next, we all push and swear
And people wonder how it came to this
Thats how babies grow up into drinkers
Thats how we become who we are
In this world theres so many careless people
Of the lives they hurt, smear, mar
Bad influences just keep coming while
Lives are being blotted with a pen
As once innocents are locked up into jail
What will happen to their children then?
Copyright ©
PuppyChow
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2005-06-04 09:56:26]
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Re: The Marred Circle of Life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 12:51:14 PM AEST
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| fantastic poem and so true,every word, I loved it |
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Re: The Marred Circle of Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST
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I really like the way you got your emotions (and frustrations) across in this one...Great topic, one often neglected. Nicely done.
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