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you.
Contributed by
that_gypsy_fire
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:00:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you.
you sit there and bathe yourself
in the oils of your own self-doubt, and insecurities
and dry off
with the adoration of others.
well, here's to your devoted fans
they can sleep with you every night,
and give you somethin to occupy the time
between perfection,
and suicide.
I would try to save you from yourself,
but who am I?
nothing compared to the beauty you experience,
or lack thereof.
so Dine with your own destruction.
I've already waged war on mine.
battling with myself night and day isn't easy.
perhaps you do, as well.
or maybe,
you've already surrendered,
and are only left feeling the heat or you own artificial hell.
one day you'll burn.
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Re: you.
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:05:47 PM AEST
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| Leave him to it, that's what I say.who could cope with such an ego,Glad you were able to get it off your chest.good luck |
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Re: you.
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:11:02 PM AEST
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I thought you expressed yourself well in this write, but I wouldn't call it 'angry', more emotional than anything...Nice job.
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Re: you.
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:10:41 AM AEST
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This is great hate and written very well:
"you sit there and bathe yourself
in the oils of your own self-doubt, and insecurities
and dry off
with the adoration of others."
incredibly idealistic..these words.
5 stars from me-
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