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Rain
Contributed by
happynikki
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 02:38:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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watching as it hits my window
the thought of it on my skin
while the sun tries to show
along with a grin
it comes down faster each drop
then i realize i'm standing in it
and i don't want it to stop
because i feel safe like this
no one is there to hurt me anymore
just the drops dropping on me
and i want more
because it makes me happy
i hide behind it
but everyone can see me
then all the sudden i have a grin
and the sun shines
the drops don't stop
they keep falling
as everyone tries to help
but i just keep running
i'm tired of reality
and a certain someone
because he hurt me
so i'll stand out here until he's gone
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happynikki
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2005-06-04 14:38:36]
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Re: Rain
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by speed-of-sound on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 04:40:08 AM AEST
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i really love rain so this poem appeals to me a lot. really nice write. i can completely relate. thanks heaps for commenting on my poem too...
hannah :D |
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