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You Are Too Late
Contributed by
justme03
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:24:26 PM in AEST
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Those words come too late
to heal this open wound
While I was breaking
would not have been to soon
I was slowly falling apart
You where slowly
breaking my heart
You said the words,
"I love you"
too late for my
poor heart
Now I'm just an empty box -
no emotions inside
Poor, black, emotionless
My heart has just died
I no longer breathe fresh air of life
I inhale stale cold lies
I no longer sing a happy tune
or bask in you melodious lullabies
I sit and stare out a broken window
shedding a thousand tears of venom
that slide down my face
I let them slowly glide
Finally releasing
all the emotions I hide inside
~Kortnie~
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justme03
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2005-06-04 15:24:26]
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Re: You Are Too Late
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:33:35 PM AEST
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now thats what i call a good poem.excellent rhythem and rhyme. and to be honest it was really rather touching. keep up the good work!
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