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Daddy
Contributed by
justme03
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 03:29:43 PM in AEST
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Daddy, please love me
love me for who I am
Daddy, I love you
Please love me
Daddy, I am sorry
Sorry for my faults and flaws
I wish to be perfect
I want to be perfect
If I could be granted just one wish
It would be to become
the perfect daughter
YOUR perfect daughter
I want you to love me
I want to make you proud
Daddy, please
please love me
That's all I want
~Kortnie~
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2005-06-04 15:29:43]
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Re: Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:53:31 PM AEST
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| awww....That's so sweet but I really hope he is proud of you and doesn't force you to be perfect. Thank you much for the support. *Hugs* |
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Re: Daddy
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by Vermillion on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:35:31 PM AEST
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thats such a sad write. i hope you dont really feel that way and if you do dont worry im sure you are the perfect daughter and if he cant see that then its his own problem for not being a perfect father.
~Vermillion~ |
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Re: Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:42:26 AM AEST
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| This poem nearly brought me to tears.... the angst & pain in your words.... Love the way you lay your soul out on paper & allow your readers to come along on your journey.... Gutsy & I respect that!!! |
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Re: Daddy
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:45:38 PM AEST
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| I don't think there is such a thing as perfection. ALL human beings are flawed to a greater or lesser extent. So what you are expressing in this poem, is, just a normal expression of human relationships (in this case family ones). Nobody ever is perfect. Believe me I know as I have three daughters of my own. |
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Re: Daddy
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:48:34 PM AEST
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| I don't think there is such a thing as perfection. ALL human beings are flawed to a greater or lesser extent. So what you are expressing in this poem, is, just a normal expression of human relationships (in this case family ones). Nobody ever is perfect. Believe me I know as I have three daughters of my own. |
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