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Quite a Story
Contributed by
THEL0STDREAMER
on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:44:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I have many a story to tell,
but one in particular you should know.
'Bout a girl who's misery
refused to let her go.
The silvery cut of the blade
was her sweet salvation.
To see the slits
was a shocking reveleation.
She once had her heart broken,
by the one and only.
He left her crying,
feeling lost and lonely.
Not a heart left
nor a soul.
Her eyes and heavy shadow
became dark as coal.
Lost in a world
far from where we stand.
Her life was miles
from where she planned.
A knife to her wrists,
then her arms and face.
The bloodshed and scars were endless,
but she was lost in her own embrace.
Finally a stop to all her aching pains,
she made a move that would change it all.
She took a step back from that 50 story roof,
and refused to fall.
Copyright ©
THEL0STDREAMER
... [
2005-06-04 17:44:47]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Quite a Story
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 07:12:53 PM AEST
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Good for you! This was so personal and honest---bravo. A well written, tragic piece...glad for the positive spin at the end.
Nice job.
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Re: Quite a Story
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by Fears on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 07:13:04 PM AEST
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wow, thats so..... scary. But if was verry good, should bted every where!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep writing!
~Fears
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