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Tired of It
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:37:39 PM in AEST
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When I need to talk
Everyone is gone on a walk
Im all alone looking for them
Im searching for just one friend
I look at all their names
And no one is in the game
Im left playing it alone
There is no other- Im on my own
Im sick of this
Im tried of it
When I need a friend in the night
There is no one in sight
Thats is it, it is final
I am going to say farewell
Im just sick of living like this
I will not be missed
I know, because there is not
One person that Ive got
All my friends dont care
I bet that they swear
At me, wishing Id die
Well, as I cry
I realize that I should give
Them their wish and live
No longer, end it here
Well, do not fear,
Im tired of living in lies
And Im going to die
Going to grab the knife
(Going to end this strife)
And stab myself
In my own back
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Re: Tired of It
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by freckle on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:22:22 PM AEST
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I love the ending of this one! So original....that's great! Hey, you commented on my poem and I wanted you to know, I'm good right now....just felt like writing that poem. But hey, if you need to talk, please PM me....the world needs all the poets it has! : ) Really, though, PM if you need to.
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Re: Tired of It
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by ApocolypseJM on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 08:28:37 AM AEST
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| This was well written. Especially the part of stabbing yourself in your own back as you may feel others have done to you. Truly deep. Good job! |
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