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Her Guilt
Contributed by
freckle
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:54:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Her Guilt
Sadly, she turned her head away
the pain too much to bear
She couldn't go on living
Life hadn't been quite fair
But it was right in front of her
if she would only peek
She knew that courage left her
So she stared, at her own feet
Too many days, too many nights
She'd dare not count them all
For her to go on living
Would be a blasphemy of soul
So quietly she stood now
A glint in pale moonlight
Quickly, then a stinging burn
A gasp,as she slipped from life.
Carol
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freckle
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2005-06-04 20:54:53]
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Re: Her Guilt
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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great poem! god, i feel like this, too. please don't be alone, talk to people. wishing you the best of luck!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work |
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Re: Her Guilt
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:39:46 AM AEST
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Dear Freckle, I used to work in the printing business too for almost 25 years at the University of Illinois.....thanking you so much for your fine comment on my Insanity Club poem, and wondering why you haven't joined us. We let Normal people in you know, but I must warn you.......they never stay that way too long????
Your poem was so sad, see so much sadness today, please tell someone or get help, we love you and don't want you to go away!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
consue........come join the Club......that will cheer you up! |
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Re: Her Guilt
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:34:07 PM AEST
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A wonderful write carol keep them coming that y they call it poetry, very good as usual . . .
Ben
aka. Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Her Guilt
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:17:44 PM AEST
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| excellent write, carol. what brought me to this was the title, since i feel guilty over petty things. from your first stanza to the last, it was a good read. |
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