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Come On Baby J!!!!!
Contributed by
poet70
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Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come on Baby J, come away with me,
To a place for just you and I,
Where we can make love to one another.
Where we can hold each other, oh how I need that,
Your arms around me, Baby J, holding me so close
our hearts beats together as the sounds of tribal drums, can you hear it Baby J?
The warmth of your lips pressing against mine makes my head spin and swill
my stomach dances deep within me, flip, flop it goes. Baby J,
how you know all the right moves, and all the right words.
I love you, you are my sweet Baby J, forever and always.
By: Tammi Pitman
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2005-06-04 23:06:21]
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Re: Come On Baby J!!!!!
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:16:28 AM AEST
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| Very sweet and tender...being loved is one of the most wonderful feelings....nicely written Tammi.....Shari :) |
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Re: Come On Baby J!!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:20:48 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem, it was really good, by the way I think everyone kind of has there own special place where they can make love and whatever they want without anybody interfearing. |
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