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Embers of My Love.
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love was like a flame,
blazing tall and bright,
but now its just an ember,
Im hoping youll ignite.
I dont know what went wrong,
though we didnt fight.
My flame is dying down,
dying down into the night.
I once thought our love was true,
for you Id live or die.
But was that really love so true?
Or was it truly lie?
Forgive me love, I know this hurts,
deep within your soul.
Believe me love, this hurts me too,
my flame may soon be coal.
God willing I will love again,
no other one but you.
A love less bitter and more sweet,
than the love I thought I knew.
Copyright ©
Jessica_Saini
... [
2003-01-03 13:00:00]
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Re: Embers of My Love.
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:31:25 PM AEST
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I was there with my husband of 28 years but believe it can be reignited if you both want it.
Sharon |
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Re: Embers of My Love.
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 02:49:21 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, but why were you shocked that you had written it? If you were afraid you were going to tear the target of the words down, then you'd probably consider some of my poetry to be monstrous. |
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Re: Embers of My Love.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 03:53:22 PM AEST
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Hi Jessica, hope this was just a fleeting moment!!
Jenni |
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Re: Embers of My Love.
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by venkat on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:26:59 AM AEST
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| In the first two lines I saw the rise of Phoenix, but later fell into a deep well of despair. At last my breath was restored after seeing the last four lines..Thank you my friend Jessica !...venkat |
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Re: Embers of My Love.
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by Jessica_Saini on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:10:41 AM AEST
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Thanks for all your comments... I really appreciate them:)
~Jessica |
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